West Side


I initially had some trouble with the original dialogue. I wanted the grandma to speak first to make it look like we stumbled on them in the middle of their conversation but as things progressed it became more complicated. So I had to do the whole thing again based on the version I submitted. I tweaked it here and there, not wanting Ben Sr. to sound like a whiny kid (although he does have an excuse to be wary of hearing people talking about death and dying because of what he's been through with his own family in the past) and from there I translated everything into english. So here it is.


* This strip was published September 20, 2006.


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